By Edith Friesen for Enlivening Edge Magazine
What if you thought of writing like a living, self-organizing system? How might that change what you write, how you write, and why you write?
Most of us have been taught to write from a mechanistic view. Our rational mind functions like the CEO, instructing us to write top-down, head-first. We write in a highly structured fashion, putting one good word, one good sentence after another. We manage the writing process by sheer will, and churn out a written product—cog-like. Such a mechanistic approach might have served us well at one time.
However, as the world becomes more complex, we are challenged to meet that complexity by upgrading everything we do. Including writing. So, how can we upgrade our writing to meet the challenges of complexity? Let me riff off Tim Winton’s PatternDynamics™ seven principles of living, self-organizing systems, suggest how they might apply to writing, and ask you some generative questions.
Feeling the Rhythm
Where in your body do you feel the impulse to write, or not write? How do you honour that impulse and adjust it for both regularity and flexibility, as the situation requires? How can you increase your sensitivity to timing in relation to your writing?
Locating Perspectives
What level of consciousness are you writing from? Which points of view are you privileging and which contentious perspectives are you avoiding or including? What assumptions are you making about your readers, and how can you engage directly with them to verify where they are coming from?
Outlining Structures
To what extent do you diagram the concepts you are writing about? How do you represent their relationships? To what extent do you align the left-brain structure of those diagrams with the right-brain structure of the writing itself?
Coordinating Perspectives
How do you search for common ground with your readers, build trust, and exchange information? How do you dovetail your priorities with theirs? To what extent do you widen the context and identify principles that unify perspectives?
Designing Decisions
How do you help your readers solve their problems more effectively? How do you group similar elements of their challenges into broader themes? How do you creatively integrate previously unconnected ideas?
Governing Reflectively
How do you set your intention and goals for a piece of writing? How do you dynamically steer your way through the writing process? When circumstances change, how do you modify your goals and keep things on track?
Source-Sensing
How do you connect with your deepest purpose for writing? How do you intuit the “where” the writing wants to go, moment to moment? How do you remain relaxed, present, and aware as you write?
Many of us long to impact our readers, our organizations, and the world with our writing. But too many of us still see writing in two-dimensional terms: words on a flat page. That shifts when we approach writing as a living, self-organizing system. Along the way, we naturally drop our desire to control the writing process, and also the heavy mantle of authorship. What remains is greater freedom and agility.
What would it take for you to approach writing as a living system? And if you already do so, what have you learned that could benefit us all?
As a lifelong writer, Edith has worked in diverse organizations and coached writers. She enjoys helping people write in Teal-inspired ways that touch the body, heart, soul, and mind. Send email to edith (at) enliveningedge.org.
Dear Edith,
Your article evokes many responses within me which makes me wonder how to connect them in the most organic and useful way for our readers and each other:
My 1st response:
What you are describing feels to me like a diamond with its many facets. When it is perfectly proportioned it refracts light and produces that fire and brilliance my innermost part has been yearning for. Thank you for helping me to sense into the tension between what is and what could be, using the questions you suggest.
My 2nd response:
It also connects me to my work with unleashing our/my/your health. One aspect of living systems I appreciate more and more is ‘rhythmicity’ which I recognise as a way of working in harmony with the capacity of my/our skills and availability as whole people. When I am able to connect to and invest my attention in the internal functioning of a living system, whether it be another human being or a group of people, it starts to become more rhythmic, meaning our energies vibrate together.
This question feels very fundamental and is very powerful when it comes from a deep sense of caring which in my experience enables Living Systems to connect to more of themselves and the core of that in others: “To what extent do you widen the context and identify principles that unify perspectives?”
My 3rd response:
How can we as EE weave the intelligence and wisdom already expressed in some of our articles by different authors so that it can amplify and accelerate the learning and sensing of readers as well as of ourselves?
here are some articles talking about living systems:
https://enliveningedge.org/research/social-systems-need-learn-biological-systems/
https://enliveningedge.org/features/weaving-perspectives-part-2-response-ability-living-systems/
https://enliveningedge.org/columns/cant-manage-complexity/
Jon Freeman says:
“The systems that we are talking about are living entities. They are networks and meshworks of relationships and contexts. They are ecologies of mind (to use Gregory Bateson’s [iv] phrase) which underlie ecologies of being and action. You cannot manage living systems from this perspective, any more than you can create health with surgery and pharmaceuticals. It takes a body to do that.
Surgery and pharma can fix acute conditions. What is the equivalent for organizations of a health-and fitness maintenance approach that maximises the capacity of the living system? What would raise their skills to the equivalent of peak athletes, top musicians, and brilliant actors?”
The 2nd response is most alive for me in my everyday life and work where I have most opportunity to practise, experiment and evolve as a whole person. I appreciate you enriched me by eliciting my 1st response which inspires me to sense into potential. What matters to me a great deal also in the context of EE’s ecosystem, is the 3rd response. Would you see any value in weaving the insights of the different articles that discuss living systems together and create something that could be useful for our readers? I feel a bit out of my depth when trying to figure that one out. How could weaving them together be most useful and impactful?
with appreciation for your enlivening energy Edith
Here is yet another relevant link: Radiant Organizations and “superconscious superorganisms” in service to all of the apparent levels of LIFE
https://enliveningedge.org/features/radiant-organizations-extended-meditation-awake-collectives-path-becoming-one/
I deeply appreciate your perspectives, Jon and Anna, and your entry into this conversation. Your last question intrigues me, Jon. I seems to me that any weaving together of insights could be done the following way. First, in a bottom-up way, through an embodied sense of living systems. What insights “feel” most alive and useful right now? And second, in a top-down way by toggling between the intuitive and rational mind and listening into the insights for most important principles. Where those 2 approaches meet and mate is in the Heart, the seat of greatest impact, at least in my experience. I feel quite shy about saying any of this as I am out of my depth here as well.
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